My eyes and ears are bleeding
Ok, the ary was drawn poorly, there was basicaly no animation. The audio sounds like recorded the voices on a computer microphone from the 90's. The story dragged, the humor was boring. I turned it off before I finished. You need work and practice. Sorry.
Funny fucking good!
Funny fucking means Doug, "the cartoon kid from the series DOUG" is laughing with me. Loved it. The only problem that I had that gave you an 8 was that it sounded like you were trying not to wake someone up while you were recording.
Good effort, just not followed through.
Spelling things incorrectly is a HUGE no-no for a competition. You did a lot of work, did a lot of very good work... but the fact that you couldn't just paste your script into Microsoft Word shows a lack of follow through.
I'm not even disappointed in the fact that the quality worsened throughout. It's just that the most obvious details slipped through the cracks. It's a good project with a good story. You really deserve decent marks for this. It's just that it could have been great, and it looked sloppy instead.
New AND interesting!
I clap @ you. GJ. Funny stuff, fer shurrrr.
I lol'ed
I liked the part where he burst into the store. Really good for two days work.