Review
Alrighty me give you some critism.
I will admit right now and say that I have not watched the previous 7 so I do not fully understand the story. Due to this, im not going to base a opinion based on story. The things I will critize is your lack of giving character expression. I saw the same sprite with not enough emotion. So next one, if you can, try and give each character more emotion to make the flash a little better to watch. Also I noticed ALOT of English spelling and ALOT of gramatical errors (such as when you used its, the word you should of used was is). So where Im getting at is to take a little more time and look over your dialog. I am not very good in Spanish so I cant notice if there was errors in Spanish or not.
So overall, take a little more time when looking over your dialog in English and give the characters a little more developement and emotion, and I bet your next one in the series should be better.
So I give you a 4 in the review and a NG vote of 2.
Bueno Suerte