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Reviews for "My Lost Valentine"

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My biggest criticism here is that it took too long to get to the story. There was a significant amount of time where I was left going come on, get on with it. Then when it started it was like dating a black dude, it was over before it really began.

Other then that the music and the animation style was pretty good. But you would have had more impact on me had you voice the letter to your dead friend rather then forcing me to read it. If I wanted to read I would have my nose in a book and not on newgrounds.

Overall, I really think that the timeliness of this flash leaves the audience flat. I know I was left feeling so what that was how long ago? Sure, to you it does not feel that way but since you are submitting things for audience approval, you have to think of your audience.

Had this happened in the past couple months, it would have been more moving.

And I do have to say, yeah, even I lost some peep to suicide. Two in fact. Very close friends. But I didn't see the justification in becoming emo over it. In fact it was embracing that mentality which helped my friends to kill themselves.

Just say no to Emo and save a life today.

I am very sorry for your loss...

...he must be a very great guy to have made you hesitate for 4 years. My heart goes out to you and your valentine friend.

You will forgive my critique, as I am here to critique flash technique:
1. You have the "load and play", but the loading scene was kinda flashy.
2. The art was good, no complaint there.
3. Personally, the music didn't seem to suit a valentine flash. But hey! Who am I to judge?
4. "...here we go!" That gave us a small laugh. Good to see you still have a sense of humor at the face of your loss. Well deserved courage right there!

Overall, this is a nice flash that I"m sure people can relate to. Woe to the person who dares blam this! Happy valentine sis! (or bro, whichever you perfer!)

illwillpenis responds:

He was a great guy.
He was perfect.

There is no reason to apologize for a critique, that's what this site is for.
The reason I chose this song, was because it was one of his favorite songs. He liked "Necro" better, but I chose this song to support NG Artists as well as my love.

I thank you for your well thought out review and your unbelievably king words.

Hmm...

It's a decent flash with a touching message. If you fix the speed (it tends to lag a bit a times), it'll be just fine.

that was great

and if any one tell you other wise fuck them thay dont know what it fells like to lose someone

(im not trying to be all Dr. phil on you)

That was deep.

I wonder what kind of corage it tok you to make that. Good job.

illwillpenis responds:

A lot of courage, thank you so very much.