Weaknes:
1- too short
2-too simple
3-no storyline
4-Not funny
5-simple sound
How to fix: put a music, a preloader,replay buton, make a storyline and make it have more than 1 minut
Weaknes:
1- too short
2-too simple
3-no storyline
4-Not funny
5-simple sound
How to fix: put a music, a preloader,replay buton, make a storyline and make it have more than 1 minut
Well I wish you would have liked it but thank you for the constructive criticism instead of just blamming it
My humble opinion
You do need to correct it: the movie repeats itself endessly.. That's the main fact xD
For your first, it showed you have tons of potential! :o
I wish it was longuer, because indeed it was kinda funny, but it was way too short, that made me sad in the end xD
The drawings were great :)
Keep on 'flashin'!
Thank you very much, I intend to =D
I meant to have a play button but I forgot to save it on there before I submitted it ^_^;