Superb
Really nice drawn, good animations, really smooth, I can 't say anything bad about this one! Keep 'em commin' :)
Reviews for "[fishes]"
Favorited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I thought this move was great i think it shoud have been daily 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This clip seems liek it would belong to the begeing of a tv show or a movie!!!!!! GREAT JOB KEEP ANAMTING!!!!! It had a good message. IT had amazing music that went along great with it! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!
Excellent
Life in a nutshell....
Hmm!
This made me think... it's really good!
Only problem is the sound is slightly weird, and sounded like screaming when I used my earphones...
Oh, btw, you have the same duvet as me :P
notorious responds:
what's a duvet
good
I liked it, a few things bothered me but overall i liked the film. I wish you couldn't see the boxes around your objects, if that's unavoidable then ignore this i guess. The animation also seemed to have a lot of noticeable loops, that kind of distracted me from the whole experience. Aside from that the animation was great. However, I wish you'd worked more on font placement, it was creative and bold to do something besides just centering your text but I wish you'd tried to do something with font size...sorry, i took a semester of graphic design so i judge that stuff a little too harshly i guess.
one more thing, the writing. I understood the things you were saying in the piece, but i feel like they should have been said differently. you need to put more thought into the words, since they're on screen they are what people will be paying close attention to, make sure what you write makes complete sense even without pictures.
anyways, all that stuff is what i'd do differently, it's your work and for every complaint I had, I still thought the work was good. Mostly I'm impressed with the style of it, it looks like a few artists notebooks crammed together, dunked underwater and set to motion, and that's great.
notorious responds:
the writing actually makes more sense if you just read it without the pictures, as for the boxes: i know the problems your having. it's not the animation, but something's weird on your computer i think. Thanks for the review!