Poet
I like the poetry.
i liked the artwork too.
not that it matters what i say today.
i never make reviews unless i really like the flash.
so i never have negative feedback.
this video makes you seem smart.
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notorious responds:
thankssss
I don't know art, but i know what i like.
AND I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! Fantastic, i love the way the backgrounds match the mood set by the poem. You have done a wonderful job. I love this piece plz make more!
notorious responds:
alright
Hmm
5 for the creativity,
flash needed some work,
bored me at points... well the whole thing was kinda the same thing so it bored me throughout...
Beginning was the best part, more flash, cooler effects.
mindscape of a nihilst in the making
intelligent and poetic while not trying to force the 'soul' of the work onto the viewer. full feature film however will never be as strong when deliverd in this type of format and may even become boring.
some backgrounds become repetitive.
inksplatter on background make a word hard to read.
onionskinned animation not really working on the human contours.(silhouet like figures).
Very refreshing content when looking at other submissions at newgrounds.
xcuse me for my bad english.
notorious responds:
full feature film won't be like this, this may be in the feature film, but there will be little animation besides it.
Poetry!
Bet you got a good grade for that poem in school, and now to put it in picture format could do nothing but improve that grade.
notorious responds:
wait what