Good presentation...needs polishing,
This piece is very, very uneven. I liked the preloader, the opening, and the menu. I laughed at parts (Armord Armadillo's scenario was the best), then cringed at a lot of this. The big problem with these shorts is that it's simply too reliant on the same jokes. There's a difference between juvenile and redundant humor, and this piece walks on both sides of the line.
Also, the sprite work, though good, needed to be cleaned up a little. Some of the edits looked great, others looked completely horrible.
It's not bad, and there's plenty to like such as how you made the elements flow together, but please broaden the humor beyond the pattern of "gay/retard" bashing,