It was really short...
Even though the animation wasnt the best I liked how you used a lot of different angles in the bedroom, and how you would pan around the character. Maybe have some background music going next time. And let us see a little bit more of the story in the next one. But overall, not bad.
hmm..
work some on the graphics, you'll be ok...i don't really like it but still good work.
Although this isn't good at all,
You do have the potential to make something that is. Your art and animation skills are good enough to make something better if you add some music, speed it up, an have a decent plot line.
I blammed this submission as I know you can do far better than this.
thats the spirit!!!my father do the same tells me that i suck,but really he is proud of me.