Not bad
As it is just an intro there's not much to rate, which is the main reason I gave you a 6/10. The only suggestion I would make is to draw the trees a bit more realistically, but other than that, its a fine intro.
Reviews for "the world through my eyes"
Nice animation
Nice animation but if thats how you see your eyes are kinda low-def ^.^
Eh this actually looks interesting but...
If you want to improve the flash, I suggest that for the intro screen it looks too plain. You might want to add more details onto the screen. Maybe you can even find some pictures on google and photoshop it to put as a background if you can't be bothered to draw.
By the way, are you using mouse to draw this stuff? Because if you do, then you're doing fine I guess for drawing without a tablet.