Amazing
Pretty god damn good.
Really nice parody graphics on the south park, and really good transformers. Whitty dialog with actual facts in it. Nice voice acting and mice music. Overall really good :D
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Reviews for "Darfur Satire Shorts"
Lacks originality
Hi there, awesome stuff you made, I always sum stuff up, so lets do it!
Pros:
+ Very funny
+ Great voices
+ The transformer part was cool
Cons:
- Lacks originality
- Animation was very basic, just because South Park does it isn't an excuse
Overall:
Cool stuff you made, sadly you definately lack some originality, but it's cool!
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Chakra-X responds:
Thanks for the review!
Yes, I do recognize that I "rode the coattails" of popular shows, but I wasn't really aiming for originality, but creativity.
However, if I am trying to parody South Park as close as possible, wouldn't it make sense to try to get the animation as close as possible, regardless of the quality of the original?
Wow
Impressive how you made it interesting and funny !
wow i think err...
...this was really impressive and O_O...
It opened eyes i think >_>
ant it was ALSO funny.
whow...
Brilliant way to spread a message.
I liked the south-park style. I wasn't too keen on the hard, straight black lines you used for the identikit ties and collars though.
The dialogue of the first part - with adults acting like little children and the surreal ending - actually matched South Park's style pretty well. You've got that tyle of humour down pat.
I felt Optimus Prime's speech was a bit dry but the ending was pretty funny whilst making a point well. Part 2 does feel a tad preachy compared to the silly surreal humour of part 1 though. I guess it can be worth being preachy if you've got a message worth preaching though.
I felt the graphics could have been better throughout - for example, better characters in section 2 - but the dialogue was great and you definitely succeeded in your goal of spreading the message. I sadly admit I never knew about Darfur until now.
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