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Reviews for "Makoto-Lee Appears"

WHAO!!!

perfectly done!!! char,script,action,evrythin is juz superb,mayb a little bit longer wud b more gr8...well done mate xD

rigo01 responds:

THANKS MAN! haha i appreciate ur review!

duuude!

smooth sprites, good story and funny as hell
..even though my speakers dont work ><

rigo01 responds:

lol thank you bro hahaha
the sound it was decent i have to say lol
hahah but thank you!!

word

sweet deal man

Niiiiiiice!

Nice job guy! The only things I can think of to make that any better besides what has been said already, is that you should have used a slightly 3D platform for the chars to stand on, such as those in games like River City Ransom. If you don't know what I'm talkin about, just PM me and I'll get you a picture.

Nice job!

rigo01 responds:

thank you for taking the time to check it out.

i am on it.

Great fast paced action.

The action was fast paced, clean and well done.

However, there is one HUGE drawback!

The dialogue is way too slow, slowing down the pace of the movie and kills the viewers interest in finishing watching the entire thing.

If you can speed that up, the movie would likely get an even higher score.

rigo01 responds:

Thank you for your review, ive already taken using Voices as talking instead of text and you are right.