Uhm
Uhm... what can I say... odd stuff I guess. o-o The idea of that guy pissed of and shooting at the weather was great, although the explicit language went a bit too far (just like other people said so before) And rocks falling from the sky is the best way for weather to fight back. XD
Explicit language went to far? lol Wait till you see him actually angry.
Funny submission, bad ending.
I am a big fan of weather-related stuff. Therefore, I decided to check out this submission (after receiving an e-mail from Newgrounds about it).
Graphics/Animation: 7/10. The animation was pretty smooth, and also well-drawn. The only qualm that I have about it is that in the first few scenes, it seemed like you used repeated frames of animation going back between the two people. In addition, the two people weren't facing each other, and their lower bodies weren't moving very much. Overall, it was pretty good, but there was room for improvement.
Plot/Story: 6/10. The plotline was pretty well-done, at least for the first part. As someone who sometimes doesn't like the weather outside, this really caught my attention. However, the second part (inside the house) was unneeded, in my opinion. It had nothing to do with the subject of the flash, and the large penis was unnecessary. You should have kept the flash short and sweet, and ended it with the meteor falling (which technically isn't a weather event, but I won't take away anything for that).
Humor: 6/10. The first part outside was very humorous, and I loved the idea of shooting at the sky to get rid of the weather. However, more could have been done with it, especially with the bullets (that would have been the only purpose for the second scene - seeing the bullets all fall through the roof of his house). The second scene wasn't very humorous, and the large penis was not funny.
Overall: 6/10. (8/10 for part 1, 4/10 for part 2) I felt that this was a funny submission. There is definitely room for improvement here (sometimes shorter is sweeter), but in the end, it did put a smile on my face.
There's always room for improvement man... thus is the life of an animator. ^^
The last scene was just a weird random bit I decided to add on. I thought it okay... giant penis' are awesome. :3
Well...
Weather is one of my specialties, I really like being informed about it. Still, I liked the way how you make fun of it.
Although, you must know...weather isn't only about clouds...
Weather is very complicated. I know. I took an earth science class. :P
this...
ok WTF IS WITH EVERY ONE AND PENISIS i didn't come to watch a gay porn movie i came to watch some quality flash! i mean SERIOUSLY if it actully has a piont or some REAL comedic factor then fine but it seems that every one has to put some freaken balls or what ever into there flash movies next time dont put penisis or testicals unless it actully pertians to the story line or has comedic amusment
It's not gay it's just a joke... chill...
A fair attempt
I understand the somewhat random and bizarre nature of this piece of flash, but that being said it was simply executed poorly. The animation was average, nothing to flashy but it got the job done. The dialogue didn't make much sense, which is what you were going for, but it was also lacked any sense of comic timing. What I could understand of it anyway, which was for me the biggest issue here. I did not understand the voice acting very well so I had to guess at seventy percent of what was being said, which instantly destroys humor (unless that's the aim of the comic). Anyway, the ending bit had a touch more humor in it preempting harsh critiques but it went on too long and was also hard to understand. Albeit. . . . . his beard made me giggle, and for that alone I award you a six.
lol woot 6! :3