parts of it were ok
Kinda reminded me of Gumby lol. it was alright but the only problem was that I thought there wasnt really much of a plot or a point to it. other than that I liked it. please try harder on the next submission you do :-)
Reviews for "Clayground - Mozeck"
eh........
you have very good clay-mation and pretty damn good sound. However I didn't find it funny. I think trying your hand at something serious might work out better. Course this is MY view and you don't have to follow it.
good animating
But the story was quite boring. Work on making more interesting stories. Ask your friends. Friends always have good ideas of stories.
BlakTornado responds:
Well it's not that I have bad stories - it's that I write them as I animate so I can't spend time perfecting them nor can I plan out an episode fully. As my camera is going to be in repair for 4 weeks (I dropped it :P) then I shall write out several shorts and see if they're better. if so, it's scripting all the way, baby.
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I preferd the other ones this one just isn't funny. It's about as funny as a penguin wrapper joke.
BlakTornado responds:
I agree. I had no inspiration for this one at all... There are a few subtle moments nearer to the end that might be more comical but it's just not that great.
I'll try and work on something better. It's hard to create something amazing when you've already made 40 and are running out of ideas, haha.
And plus, I don't want to end up pushing too close to the story line of my feature length which I am writing.
sorry dude no
dry humour, with a poor script, with poor storyline was just asking to be a poor movie
god i hate the word Mozeck now
sorry wish i could have given you better
keep trying
BlakTornado responds:
You liked it before? :P