Meh...
not very good, could have been made a lot better. 1/5
Reviews for "Pokemon Center Commercial"
Well...
I'd say that that was moderatly funny, maybe a chuckle or two at the most... At least it wasn't intirely boring... good luck getting through the judgement phase, this one will be tough...
I thought you actually had a good idea
However, this "commercial" was awefully boring to watch, mind you it is your 1st flash, it could have been a hit.
A few suggestions -
- Use a higer framerate, like 24 fps.
- If you're using sprites, thats fine, but try to be more fluid with your tweening:
like easing, and zooming in and out.
- Make the overall style a bit more cornier, since commercial is what you're aiming for. Instead of sliding pictures, try to make it POP-OUT at me, with more interesting backround effects.
- If you are willing to go the extra step, use voice actors, even your own voice if you're up to it.
Good luck with your flash creations...
- Chaos
DarrkOne responds:
Thanks for the suggestions!
I think that I may someday update the flash once I get a better at this.
Your advice will help lots.