Nice!
I liked the intro, it was chilled, but it had a really energetic beat too.
I keeps pumping, but is not too crazy powerful at all, I agree with poowis, it would be awesome in some kind of shooter, a chill but pumping background music.
There were a few drum beats I thought shifted around a little bit too quickly, but that is just how they struck me. . .
Excellent work my friend, you are improving a TON!
Omega
Chilled & energetic is definitely what I tried adding in this. Yeah, it's suppose to e not so pumpin', but not so woohoo, happiness :D I agree with you & poowis, background music this could be. I could see how you thought they were a little fast. I've been tryin' to improve indeed. Making these DnB tracks helped alot & thanx for the review!
FUCK! IM TYPING THIS REVIEW ALL OVER AGAIN!!! XD
Anyways, I think that you should make your drums more hard hitting and electronic. And also the subbass arraingement wasn't very good too! But, I really liked the atmosphere and the melody. And bass was pretty good too! Liquid DnB is still my favourite subgenre of DnB but I still feel that you need a lot of improoving to do...just like me XD!
p.s. Remember...hard hitting is better for DnB, even liquid!
~Jassummisko
Lolz, y again?? Yeah, the kick probably could've been harder or somethin' & I mostly put the sub-bass for more the techno sounding parts & all that. I'm glad you liked the atmosphere cuz i've noticed that in my newer songS, I'm tryin' to make more atmosphere so thanx. Glad you liked the main bass since this genre is DnB. Yeah, when it comes to Liquid DnB, I try to make it atmospheric, but good. I do understand I need to improve for sure for I normally don't make this genre all the time. Thanx for the review!!!
Ergh
I don't know about this one, seems really video gamey. The drums seem way to fast to accent the bass or vice verse. Don't know why, but it feels like you lost your flavor on this one and are trying to sound like the run of the mill stuff, no personality in it. I may be completely wrong. I'm just really "meh," about this.
Yeah, it kinda has a retro feel to it, but I was aiming for somethin' like that. Hmmm, I don't know. The drums are always suppose to be fast in this genre, but I'll see in my next DnB song how it goes. Hmm, yea I tried puttin' a lot into this one, but I don't know. I'm startin' to get more into the genre now is why I made this song and all. Thanx for the review though!
Nice bro
it sounds good but its the kick needs to be in your face and the quality needs some work but my songs have crap quality. its catchy and pretty good for a first track. and at points like 2:15 everything sounds mushed together. a bit of compression and eq-ing would be good to make them all sound separate at the same time as one track. good job nonetheless.
Yeah, the next song I make that will be DnB, I'll make sure it sounds better. Also the snare. Yeah, the quality could be just a little better, but I think I defintely had good mastering none the less. Yeah, technically it's kinda like a first attempt. Cuz I made this song called Hardcore Stealth that was DnB, but its not so good since that was the program I started off with before the new one I started using which is awesome. I would be able to make this higher quality too, but Newgrounds won't allow the quality size. Since the drums are so loud that might be the reason why it seems not super compressed. Thanx for the review!