A very nice piece.
The only thing I didn't like were the female voices.
You should replace them with something else.
Entropy meaning deterioration or rotting away, I do not see how Female "Ahh"s fit into that theme. Everything else is superb.
In the full version, if you would take out the Female Voices and put something instead of them, that would be great. Maybe with piano.
I just do not like the voices. You put them in too many of your songs.
~G4M3RL0RD