funny till the end
i liked animations
but the stupid guy
ruined
it
funny till the end
i liked animations
but the stupid guy
ruined
it
the commentary ruined it
some people just have annoying vouces, like you and me
yeh
What accent was that
Commentaries are Meant to be Optional
Now, the animation and premise are okay during Acts I & II--the imagined success and the real failure and injury--but Act III's rambling commentary detracted from the experience because it was poorly done... both deliberately and performed poorly in general (poor performance at being poor... there is such a thing). It prevented me from clicking replay.
To all authors: if you think a Commentary would be cool to add, either you don't or allow it as an optional audio track (even if it is supposed to suck).
Pretty good
I really enjoyed the quality of the animation, it was pretty smooth and the skating scene felt very powerful. I felt the humor was lacking and I did get smiling until towards the end of the commentary when that ludicrous chart was drawn. It was a decent flash, although I wish it was longer. I look forward to your next piece!