Reviews for Ascendence

[toyhyena]

Preeeetty good, good sir

hatever your reason for the buttons, I thought they were definitely a great idea. It was pretty cut-to-the-chase and the story was definitely easy to follow. I even think it made me gain interest to see the next part. Not sure how to explain it exactly. Can't say I was crazy about all the songs you used, but the action had some pretty cool moments. I feel like it wasn't as fluid as I would've liked, kinda choppy, but the only way to fix that easily is to speed it up, but then the music would be off. I thought it was a pretty good flash, kept my attention and all... my only serious gripe is that the story had cliche all over it. The upside on that is that people are immediately familiar with it and are there for the fireworks. Keep cranking them out though.

[Wizrd]

Not bad!

For a FBF movie, this was pretty good. I like your style; it has much potential. Keep working on movie elements (i.e. scene transitions, background, etc.) and your animations will improve. Good job!

[RappyRapist]

Not too shabby

I gave you a 7 because I think that you have the animating skills, some scene were really well done, your ideas for animation were nice, although the overall flash needs more in between frames because it's too laggy. You could rework your style too. I know it's a lot of work, but better graphics catch way more people.

Also, remove the buttons, this is a movie, movies aren't made to be interactive. For the music transition, some fade-outs will do perfectly. Then center your text to the middle of the screen so people know better where to read and copy lots of frames so people have the time to read. Then you get on with the next chapter by fading the text.

I'm impressed by you dynamism, but you clearly need more skills ^^b
Good job for your first submission!

[keyonastring]

fell short

the beginning and end of the movie were good for the quality of drawing, but the middle just felt lazy, like you were showing the basic frame of what you were going to make. Like I was watching a story board. The animation was smooth, but the quality felt cheep. Over all good story line, fun movie to watch.

bluecameraman responds:

I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the review.

[Weeb-Studios]

Didn't enjoy it

I didn't enjoy it but I believe you have potential