I Have an odd feeling I've seen this before
parts of it were a BIT too familiar, but the rest seemed original. maybe it's deja vu (I've been on this site a fair while, so I've seen quite a few FBF movies)
Sorry for being skeptical, but it's hard to weed out the thieves from the artists nowadays.
For what this is, it's very good, and I can understand the reason you didn't finish it (I am very lazy at FBF as well )
But I wish you had, or at least release a completed version later?
Fill up the blank spots, and you've got yourself at least a 3/5 right there.
You're still learning, and you show some very STRONG raw talent.
Keep it up, and I'll be competing with you for daily firsts in no time
From one FBFer to another;
-GKG