Reviews for Star Work Episode 1

[deedledeedotca]

Jameson, you've done it again.

First of all, I'd like to address Patrickmans rating of 0, and comment "That was pretty entertaining'. Nice of you to give him the lowest possible score- the same score the biggest piece of shit would have gotten. I give you a big 0 on life.

Jameson, I remember when another employee of 'the nameless company' was going to write a letter about the work environment and unfairness of the whole deal.
Way to take it disturbingly too far and put all those hours of resentment into what will no doubt be your next big series!

-Your pal and generic 'female voice', Dee.

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

I decided to turn something destructive into something constructive, also there's a better chance of this becoming a huge hit and said company filing a lawsuit against me for slander than them reading a letter from a disgruntled ex-employee.

Also, I think you frightened Patrickman

[theBLUR]

great!

All you need to do is work on your characters' movements. They seemed stiff.

I really liked your music choice.

The story is great. I can't wait to see the next one.

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

I mean to keep them that way, all my cartoons feature characters done in that "stiff" style. It allows me to worry more about the look of them and to minimize the amount of animation I need to do, which I don't like.

[Smeganator]

willy

sorry tht was random .... welll it was ok but i found only one bit funny and that was the bit wid the ladies so i give it a 6

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

Hope you find it funnier next time around

[Hayamo]

HAHA!

Now THAT is the best thing I've seen all day! I suggest you work on animation a bit, but the artwork is your own style... so that's good.

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

Thanks, the animation won't get much better since I'm more of a writer than an animator. But who knows.

[AzPbSniper]

it was alright

it was a good start for the genre but i would like to see vast impoovement by the time the next one rolls around

Uptown-SlimJim responds:

How vast are we talking here? I'm only one man, and a lazy one at that