Pretty good
This submission is only twenty-five seconds long. So...naturally it's harder to really get a good feel of what you were working with in here as it starts to loop pretty quickly.
I'm on the fence if this would make good menu music or not. I do think some of the sounds could work with Menu music and some not so much.
I'm crazy impressed with how this submission amassed 40 (as of this date) Flash entries it was submitted in. I guess the people disagree with what I say above, no? haha
It's a pretty decent loop. Nice work.