good idea
look, the idea is cool and slightly funny but the stuff that goes on newgrounds needs to be stuff that people will watch many times. im not going to let something through that im never gonna watch again and that just isnt that good. dont take it the wrong way, u have good ideas but the flash needs work, keep practising and u might get on
Take it from me and a lot of other people:
Do not give up! If you give up you are only proving to yourself that you have no chance ever but you do! Keep making flashes like these and listen to the criticism others give. Keep submitting and don't get down if one doesn't make it.
Now the art was quite unattractive. Start by making everything line up and have the movements in the animation more slow and realistic. Maybe a higher frame rate? Keep working buddy, you'll become better if you try.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Horrid art. Now, all I'm saying is that you need to improve your art. Don't give up.
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Don't wan't to be blamed?
Well find something more interestig than complain 'kay?
Not getting blammed is simple.
Just put a strong effort and lots of time in, and don't ask for pity, that's pathetic. Dont be concerned with passing judgement, be concerned with becoming a better animator. Write a script (an interesting one), draw a storyboard, then animate. May take weeks or even months, but who cares. If you like to animate, then you'll be straight when it's done.