Reviews for Capture The Flag: Ep 2

[PyromaniacsAnonymous]

One of the best new series on NG.

Other than the odd volume issue (some voices were too quiet, particularly Evan's), this was superb. Artistic graphics (particularly the scene with Evan climbing the ladder, beautiful work there) and a decently deep story with a few dark undertones thrown in. I can only offer kudos on such good work, and hope to see more.

And if you need any bit-part voice acting, feel free to PM us. It'd be an honour to be a part of this, though we can't offer help on the animation side since our animator went AWOL.

Keep up the good work, and don't let the naysayers get you down,

Al, an Anonymous Pyromaniac.

[ToonCastleTV]

not bad

tfor kids though their check bones should not show, kids have chubby checks. also their arms def need work, and your style of extreme detail was kinda a eye sore. the storyline wasn't bad the characters were strong enough atleast ... I really liked your backgrounds though, you should simplify though and maybe toss in some fbf. Gosh do I lurve fbf..

[pizza4ever]

awesome!

that was awesome!

you probly know of this, but sometimes when people spoke, their mouths didn't move till a few seconds after.

thats the only problem i see with this. intresting cliff hanger..bad jokes(no effence)

anyway, great work =) cant wait for the next one

[FattyWhale]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Great stuff! Can't believe I have never heard of this series before. You've got a very good storyline in this one and very good voice actors as well. I definitely think they make a lot of what this movie is. Also, there are the surprisingly detailed drawings that you have in every part of this movie. Quite impressive!

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I would say to improve would be animations. They are good, but walking and some movement still looks a little awkward and unnatural.

[Smiley-Bob]

Dude no...

That ending was REALLY dumb....
"Fly fly fly" and they push him off a cliff because he saw a stupid dragon. It seemed like you were writing it and you ran out of ideas or you got bored of animating and so you just ended it. That really pissed me off....It was such a great flash until then. It would've been a 10/10 if it wasn't for the ending.
Other than that I love it.
I thought "Even is so gunna see Amy in the shower or something now that he is living with them" when that dude was like "Amy come here". :D.
Little relationships in movies and TV shows are awesome...Even + Amy = YESSSS.

So yeah.
Push him off a cliff because he saw the totem dragon talking about the skeleton key was dumb.
Fixit or do better next time and I might forgive you...lol.
As if you care what some stupid fan thinks. So yeah. Try not to have such a terrible cliff hanger next time....lol cliff hanger, he got pushed offa cliff :D.

Aeonstars responds:

I care very much what my fans think and since you've identified yourself as one of them, I respect your opinion. I do not agree with it however. It takes 4 months of preparation and getting my voice actors prepped is one of the first things I do. I actually had the ending planned out before most of the flash itself. Thanks for watching!