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Reviews for "The invisablemobile 1"

i agree

i agree with CruzAzul-19 you got potientional but here is what you can do in the next movie
1 longer music so no looping the song 3 times
2 i gave you a 4 so dont be sad
3 a little better on the windows paint animation
4 notify me when #2 comes out i want 2 see it

Liked it.

This was actually a pretty great flash, and the story of it was really really great. The music in this was a great touch, and this deserves a better score. Just work on making voices next time, and just better graphics. I see potential in you, and I think you should make this series. Practice makes perfect, and you could get a lot better if you do the series. STill great flash, and Happy New Year! :]

goldie12345 responds:

Well i tried to add voice but.... they could not be heard clearly

hmm....

honestly, the animation was kinda crappy.....
however, that idea is great, and it could make a great story line if you improved the graphics!

Where to start...

I would say that until you get this looking better.. you should not continue the series.. there i said it nicely.. also.. you should seriously think about actually :animating: the characters, not just constantly tweening of morphing everything.. and it would be great if the action sped up, the storyline revised, the characters were more interesting, the music was better fit, and charactes had moving mouths, or just voices even. just use a handful of these, and animate then remake this one.. then go from there... sorry, but i doubt this will make it through

1/10

It was 100% tweens :(

But you st least tried which is more than 1/3 of newgrounds does.