Neat Storyline
I love the storyline, the costume & when u using the First-Person view. But the graphic/art need more works.
I'm not judging your artistic value, just try to make it better character design. Oh, AND THE BACKGROUND TOO!
Do this, you'll receive a 4 vote.
But for now, I give u 3/5 & 6/10.
Cheers!
P.S: There's some typo too. (E.G: Planat, CORRECTION: Planet)
ok i will improve on the backround design and animation and character design and my spelling LOL.but thanks for the review=) and i am glad you liked it.
cool
it was cool i really liked it!
thanks glad you enjoyed it=)
It needs alot of work
Well, it wasnt very good. I'l start with the positive, the backgrounds were cool, they definetly could've been better but not bad at all, there was variety in the weapons you saw the soldiers using, and the video was very colorfull along with some decent voice acting.
The things that needed work were, well, lets see... the characters looked weird and messed up, thats one of the biggest problems really, from upper backs that looked like curved fishing hooks to hunchback soldiers, they looked really dumb, also, it seems as though somone had Halo's spartans in mind when they drew them. There was no real story aswell, just random violence that looked plain stupid and laughably bad at times, And No, The 1/2 paragraph with vast amounts of grammar errors at the beggining does not count as a story. Im not really one to care whether or not people use proper grammar when writing or typing, but when your making a project such as this with so little writing is it so much to ask that flash makers check their spelling at least once before submiting it as a finished piece of work? Not only did the characters look like a poor version of the spartan's from the Halo universe, everything did, war space ships, everything. It's not a bad thing if your going to use a sci fi theme but you cant have characters that look suspiciouslly like master chief if you use a sci fi theme, unless of course you are making a Halo fan project.
In a nutshell
*Needs a story
*The Characters need some serious work
*The action scenes need to be improved
All bad points aside, it is still much better than I can do, even if I have never attempted to learn flash, I lack the art skills to even make one scene from this short flash.
I would rate it a 2/5
ok thanks for being honest and i will try to improve on all the things that need work=)