Excellent
That was quite awesome my friend. A great flash, and incredible art and fbf. Your style was nice, and I definitely appreciated the whole red-grey-scheme. The only objection I had was that the shuddering camera screen was a little over tweeny. I'm being really nit-picky here though. But, if you wanted to improve, you should try that camera scripting... I'm not the one to ask, but I know Adam Phillips uses it with his Brackenwood shit. With your style it would work great. Sorry I'm being so vague, but I'm sure you know what I'm talking about... or not...