cool
cool, but i want to know why the cop don't just kill that guy manipulating something like a big stone in the guy's head
Reviews for "Conditions2: Consequences"
DJJ-asshole responds:
Because the criminal was holding a gun towards his wife?
Oh yeah...
Can't wait for the third one...
DJJ-asshole responds:
I'll try to finish it as soon as possible.
There should be more depth.
I wasn't sure that you could pull it off at the beginning because of how weak the plot felt, and my suspicions seem to be right. The only thing you need is more depth. Since this is only the second in the series, barely anywhere in the plot and it says to be concluded in the next episode, it leads me to the conclusion that this series is lacking in story depth (so far that is). This appears to be the beginning of a story - a man embittered by the death of his wife due to the unbending rules of a device. The only thing is, he has to do something now or it seems almost pointless. I could be wrong though, depending on where you take this in the next episode, I'm just uncertain on how you will fit in a meaningful plot in the next one.
On the flash - great animation and graphics, voice acting was decent. Remember that the plot has to go somewhere, that's the thing you need most here as far as I can tell.
DJJ-asshole responds:
Don't worry.
I make movies the way I feel like it, so wether there's a plot or not, I just want to finish telling a story I made up.
But somehow, I can guarantee you, the story of Red is to allow the story to grow towards the plot.
why?
Why did the good guys not just use their special device thing to kill the evil guy instantly? Besides that it was still good
I don't mean to sound like an idiot, but...
couldn't Red have just turned that bad dude's head into a watermelon or something? With a melon for a head, one would find it difficult to pull a gun trigger.
The thing I like most about this series so far is the title. "Conditions" (adrenaline/being alive/etc...) it's a great idea. I like the story, you just need to improvise more on the technicalities (did I phrase that right?).
Just make an excuse like, "I couldn't do it... I have a deadly fear of watermelons! If only I could've overcome that fear... If only I could've saved my wife!" -- you're free to use that by the way. It would be nice to mention me in the comment if you do. LOL
ALSO- ur animation is fine the way it is. don't go changin' 5/5