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Reviews for ""Winter""

Freaking Gross. Seriously. Gross.

I mean seriously, that has got to be the third grossest thing I have seen in a long, long, LONG time. Overall the story-line itself was interesting, and the message you portrayed was meaningful - that is, the sort-of forgotten veteran during christmas time.

I find myself questioning your use of blood, gore, and especially worms. The same message could have been portrayed in a much more meaningful, and much less grotesque way. Instead of a skull, he could've hugged a photo of his platoon, instead of worms he could have hacked up bile. Most everything else could be kept the same. The snow collecting on him was a nice touch, especially when combined with the all the happy other people yonder.

Your technical aspects were perfectly fine. The music especially fits with the ambiance you portrayed. The artwork was crisp, well drawn, and well rendered. The blood effects - that although in my opinion are completely overdone - were well made as well. Everything was well-synced and in time. You could add pause or fast-forward buttons, though, in an animation that is this short that might be uncalled for.

In the end... Yeah, it was gross. But as far as the sort of dark, gross, horrible animations are concerned this one wasn't that bad. Perhaps it was because you had a story. Perhaps it was because you used quality art elements, and not pure abject gore. Heck, perhaps I am just in the christmas spirit. Perhaps my abject hatred of this genre will return the day after tomorrow. I think though, that if it does, this particular animation will remain an outlier, in that I actually like it.

Sherbalex responds:

the third. hell yesssss

Depressing

The animation was well done and the idea was easy to recognize. However, although the animation was well done, I found several things lacking:

1. Way too much blood. I understand that this is a poor homeless man but is all the gory detail really necessary? Personally, I think it only takes away.
2. Very depressing. Whether or not you intended to depress people who watched this, depression is a very annoying emotion to deal with and normally makes viewers more reluctant to watch the flash over again or any further flashes done by that author.
3. More content. This isn't bad but I think you could take it further.

One thing I really liked was that everything was completely understandable without any voices or text.

Sherbalex responds:

ho ho ho

....mixed thoughts

it was great but it was still kinds messed up dude

the music in the first part

wtf!!!!!!!! WTF!!!!!!!!!! W!!!! T!!!!! F!!!!

Nice animation.

Its very nice animation. some of the best I have seen on NG.
But i agree with Aaron1046. You should not make flashes like this. There are real people that really suffer out there while we are all at home enjoying our lives.
And its depressing.
10/10 for the great work, very detailed, but... 0/10 for the animation. Try to make a happier animation next time.
:'(

Sherbalex responds:

ill make whatever the hell i damn well want to, mi amigo.