wait your thirteen!!!!!!!!!!!!111
first of poor quality not very good. second i am reporting this your an underage user!!!
Reviews for "Cole's New Grounds"
NorthAmericaProduct responds:
13 isn't underaged :S
Work To Do!
Hey there!
Okay, this submission was average, POSSIBLY a bit over average. Your animations went well with the flash, and you got the guts to post yourself.
But, you need lots and lots of sound. If you are level 5, say it, and add a "KACHING" sword kind of sound (or whatever the hell they sound like.) And if someone says "Fuck you", they should be pissed, so try 'yelling' (but not too loudly!) to the other hand.
But good job on the hand and animation! I loved it!
One extra tip... but music in the background. Quieter than everything else, but very noticable. And please, for the love of god, don't make it The Spanish Flea. </3.
Your friends of Newgrounds,
HRM [Hi-Resolution Mayhem]
Contributors:
-Dan
-Trevor
NorthAmericaProduct responds:
Thanks for the input. I was adding this kinda like a pilot to see if people like it, and then I'd make it better and you really helped me out.
Nice try I guess
Hey man you gave it a shot but you have to work on this. Think more about your content because honestly this wasn't very deep! Talk about your accomplishments and goals, even if they arent flash-related...
Anyway good luck with your future submissions!
NorthAmericaProduct responds:
Thanks, at least there's some people that help me out...
cool
needs some work but since you admit it sucked i give you an 8/10 and 4/5.
NorthAmericaProduct responds:
lol thanks
Try Again?
Mmmm... No. The audio was very choppy, and overall it was short and missing some of the elements that are becoming standard in these things. Also, it'll go smoother if you record it all at once instead of stopping it once you finish a segment.
NorthAmericaProduct responds:
I agree and if i edited ,like i said it would be all at once