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Reviews for "The Dot of Excellence 2"

Terrible Flash

This has got to be the worst flash I have ever seen pass on Newgrounds. The music is terrible, and it's only a bunch of pictures of characters from video games. The only constructive criticism I can offer is to actually TRY and make a decent flash.

Wegra responds:

Well at least you werent a total asshole. But thanks for the review anyway.

Does anything...

Ever happen? I sat there for like a full minute before I realized I was bored to tears.

Wegra responds:

No. I just wanted to see if this would pass.

Lacks everything

I think that we're touching upon the real issue with this 'series'. You're past caring if they do or don't pass judgement.

What we've ended up with is a Google search of images of 'video game females', which you've pasted around this one dot with an appallingly drawn smiley. I'd suggest that the best way to improve this flash is to try using a little technique that we in the Flash community call animation. This involves moving something around on the screen.

You've not got a preloader, so first off try making one of those. A tutorial can be found in the database of all NG Flash. From there, give the movie some substance - plot and background imagery are examples of 'substance'

The audio quality sucks, so don't compress it as much. Plenty of file space to get you to the 10Mb limit.

Try drawing your own images - these would look much better, as people look more favourably upon people willing to draw their own stuff than sprite manipulation artists.

[Review Request Club]

How did I know?

Again, I'm giving you a score of 0/10. Why? Because again you've proven that you don't put ANY effort into making flash, but instead you're spamming the portal. The terrible thing is I bet you actually do have SOME flash talent, but you aren't using it at all. I'm going to lay it out again in my format, because it's my job.

Graphics/Animation: 0
There was nothing about this flash that I could consider "graphics" or "animating" of any kind. This is why you have a 0.

Audio: 0.5
Again, you have improved a little bit from the Dot of Excellence, but not by much because...it just wasn't all that impressive.

Originality: 0
Considering you have 4 of these right now, and they're all basically the same - I would say that there's no originality.

Humor: 0
Still hasn't made me crack a smile.

Story: 0
No story.

Overall: 0/10
There's no redeeming quality about this flash. Not one. You need to put effort into your flashes before actually submitting them.

\Review Request Club/

Wegra responds:

Your review amuses me. I like how people hate the series.