hey nice!
that was a very good flash submission, even if it was your first. Keep practicing. Some things you might want to consider, try to stream music between scenes, and make a longer submission. Overall, nice first try.
Reviews for "mouse helps cat with laun"
CricketJam responds:
yeh i'll do better to mix the soundtrack outside of flash and just have one file in there.
CONSIDERATE ADVICE THANK YOU KIND ONE! I NEEDED YOUR HUMORING HEART TO SAVE MY Sh]++Y CARTOON FROM BLAM THANK YOU!
Pretty good for your first time.
The animation was pretty good, and i enjoyed the music.
Hmm
Not bad for your first flash. The song was catchy too! It was a little short though.
CricketJam responds:
THANK YOU! FOR YOUR GENEROUS SUPPORT! YES JACK OFF JILL ROCKS!
for your first flash.
yo have left an impression on me to want to see your next submissions, well done
7/10 and 3/5
CricketJam responds:
THANK YOU FOR YOUR FAITH AND VISION! I KNOW I WON'T LET YOU DOWN! MOSTLY....
good animation
i enjoied the animation, and good choice of song jack off jill!! but its only a 7 because you cut the song apart, its not a long song, it you spent a bit more time you could of animated to the whole thing, keep it up though