Work harder.
Most of your score is coming from the fact it's portal. Otherwise, it's just one big ad- no go.
Reviews for "Portal: Batteries."
meh,..
it was ok. Good idea but poorly executed. Try using a real voice. It is a lot more ... "easy" to listen to. Also, if you have a black battery maybe you shouldn't put it on a black background! :O
You get 3 stars for the joke
The joke was funny. The delivery was not. You needed to shorten the dialog. Most definitely get someone better than the auto-voice to imitate Glados and you might want to up the animation quality too if that's at all possible. Basically, you've got a good setup in theory but more work needs to be put into the delivery. And for the record, it's a pretty decent first animation but I do not give people more credit just because it's your first animation. Still, overall, decent job.
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Voices werent understandable
0/10
i just didnt like it