mmm
mmm did u upload the wrong file?
seeing the title the icon and the comment i was expecting something great but well i didn't, i didn't have a clue what it was about,
so much for expectations,
here are some tips:
use animation,
collor,
backgrounds
story,
...
i dont really understand how this made it through the portal ummm i dont really know what to say lol umm interesting update the graphics...i guess
hm..
2 for the animation, +3 for the music, and -3 for not giving credit to the artist ^_^
I did give credit to the artist, right where Newgrounds told me to do so.
It says "The Seatbelts" under "Audio" in the information about the flash.
uhh
i fail to understand how this made it throught the portal purges. But good job, simple and music wasnt' annoying which is good.
Yeah...
After seeing this I realise I've had a trip through hell and back... seriously, put some effort in dude. At least color it? :/