I like it, but...
An impressive first attempt at trance!
I give it 4/5 8/10 as in Very Good.
In my opinion this song is tiering; after looping it for a while I want to listen to some classical music or no music at all, a feeling I get all too often when listening to trance music.
Trance songs that get my Excellent rating are generally goes a little slower and has more quiet parts in it, and I can loop it until I get bored of it.
If you were to make a trance track that to get my 10/10 rating you would need to "tame" both the instruments and the build-ups/break-downs to make it an easier and more "pure" listening experience (less techno more adventure).
Even though it was highly worth the listen I don't feel that it qualifies for 9/10 (Excellent) or 10/10 (...wait did someone drug my coffee?), but I think that if you can match the quality of your other composures, you could get my 9/10 (or even 10/10 if you're lucky).
Good job sir, and please keep making those tracks!