not bad
the animation wasnt that bad but i couldnt hear a thing :(
Reviews for "TNAO:- The Beast P1"
It's good but...
You need to work on a few things. For example, you should probably get someone to do the old man's voice (Yeah, you've probably heard that one a thousand times or so) and you should watch your grammar, especially on these 'serious' flashes. I noticed you accidently put down 'u' instead of 'you' in the old mans lines when you see the first man dead so just be careful with that.
Animation is very nice and clean but at some points it's a little jerky but that's to be expected on your first animation. Other than that, nice job for your first animation and keep up the good work. I'll be hunting down that comic book to see what happens next!
meetxj9 responds:
Thanks,
The book is a whole new diffenrent story, i finished the book while i was still in college. However if you visit my DEV you will see some samples of issue 1 and 2. The art differance from both of them is quite big.
this was good but needed voice.
u dont want ppl reading the subs when ur graphics are good. um i noticed right at the end there was voice not sure if that was all the way thu it was so quite. and the wind was loud so i didnt think of turning the sound up. but fix that voice thing and u got a winner
good!
nice one.
Alien anyone?
looks kinda like a rip off of the Alien series...still some good artwork though. What i want to know is did you take the idea of the chains from spawn and the alien from, well alien? Either way it looks like it could be a fun series to watch if you get the voice acting all fancied up, subtitles could be a bit smoother.