Whole lot of fun!
Great from start to finish! Very funny story with great humor thrown in for ratbag and furball to fight over and with. Awesome job dude! Extremly entertaining and just plain fun to watch.
Reviews for "Ratbag & Furball #05"
stoners-lunchbox responds:
Thank ye.
FBF good, but a wee bit short perhaps?
As previous commenters noted, this may not have been the best script - imo, it was about 20-30 seconds shorter than needed, as the fighting sequence went by very very quickly, and could have used more detail.
Music was good, as usual - graphics, well - the FBF went very well, and you did some nice effects.
I would have given a 7, except you were very obviously restricted by class requirements and old man Tempus Fugit - so I had to allow for that.
I don't think Tom and Jerry would have shared pear pies together at the end of one of their cartoons - but I think it was a bit of a Jonesian ending to have Ratbag and Furball lunch tete a tete - a nice touch to the script, that.
If you didn't cop an "A" for this in class, may Darrell Hair be that teacher's next pupil :)
stoners-lunchbox responds:
LoL, for that piece of information, the cartoon scored a 97% (High Distinction) and is now used at Kangan and Batman TAFE in Broadmeadows as example work. Thanks for the support and i hope i get to make more soon.
making series
that was exellent and it would make great series
stoners-lunchbox responds:
It already is. :D
nice
not awesome plot or anything like that, but entertaining in a tom and jerry sort of way. Nice animating and art.
stoners-lunchbox responds:
A pear pie war with plot? no thanks.
I was surprised to see this.
I'm glad you started animating again.
stoners-lunchbox responds:
I never really quit. I just took a little (wtf?) break.