Constuctritisismish
Being blunt (and honest) here, I don't think that this is one of your better WIPs --- the unfinished Rising Summit takes that name.
The good stuff:
-The intro (Nice mix and gradual wind up to the song)
-The beat (It's AWESOME and FITS :DDD)
-The piano solo (Love these, you're great at them :)
-The end/wind down (Finishes it great)
.... So yeah, that's pretty much your whole song there, isn't it? <.<
It's just that one teeeny tiiiny litttle thing throws the whole thing off....
The bad stuff:
-The sheer, overwhelming repetitiveness of the body. (Yup.)
Really though, skipping from pretty much any part except the start, end, or piano part, it's THE SAME THING. I can hear the shift in it, but it lacks enough actual kick and change to make an impact to the song as a whole. To be honest, I found it really hard to listen to the whole thing because of it :/
And that's all I have to say :x
Sorry bout the negativeness - but hey, a review is a review, and I figure that ^ is better then "Yay it was awesome keep up the good work; your eternal fan on whatever for forever, ______!"
Ohhh, suggestion(s)?
-Add some kick and audible shift in the main part
... Yeah, I'm done - Thanks for putting up with this :x
-Your fan, Xavier