Too short and not funny
This game just wasn't fun. The jokes were stupid and unoriginal. The fact that you wrote "u" instead of "you" told me from the beginning of the story that the whole thing was unimaginative. I think you spent more time on the technical aspect than you did thinking of how to tell a story. All in all, if you're going to make a half-***ed game like this again, then I think most people don't really care about motivating you to go through with it.