nice!
Sick beat! Props to BrokenPaper for that! The rhymes are dope! Great message! I thought the mixing was good as well, but Im sure the final will be much better! As for a demo..is a demo suppose to only be 20 bars or would they like a whole track? Im not sure.. Either way 5/5 and download..Im gonna have to check BrokinPaper's beats later today. Keep up!
Klazik
Thanks bro. BrokinPaper is amazing man. =)
Message is key, but not many people listen to the message. They listen to the beat and flow. So what do you do?
You get their attention by creating a good delivery of flow, melody and that will catch them.
20 bars.. Well it's all I wrote for the time being. And I wanted to share it. I cut the beat up to fit the 5 bars. It's more like a sneak peek/demo.
Defn check him out.
-OxyJin
another strike..
you've struck another nerve that made me shiver.
these are the things i can never say..
why?
because ive learnt-- the hard way-- that nobody will change over for what you say-- people don't change for something they can't see.
friends-- in all honest truth-- are just .. strangers.. that we talk to more often..
people my age are the ones that i can never depend on, because they are busy trying to be "something"-- they're trying to be a part of something..
i won't deny it-- i tried- i could..
but it wasn't me...
this..
i wish i had enough strength in me to" One person can make a difference, set an example"
you''re admirable..
and those words don't even come near to how this piece makes me feel...
btw- i'm jill mushiebooms on your fb page xD
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maybe i'll dance to this, if you don't mind?
i also just realised-- great way to loop it :3
Jill, I agree, I've learned that people don't easily change over what we say. But why give up? The reason I don't give up is because, I want someone who will never give up on me. Who will keep trying to help me. Even if I saw it wrong. Someone who will always be there, no matter what. You can't see oxygen, yet you breathe, you can't see the air that hits you, yet you feel it. Close your mind, and you close your dreams, you close out the future. This world has run out of great speakers. Those speakers who made a big impact on the people. The ones that made a difference, showing people, they are not alone.
I won't be as great as them, but I will live on to carry it out. Not because it needs to be done. But because I want to. You want a brighter future? You create it. It doesn't come to you.
Some of us have to suffer, so others can be happy. That's a risk I'm willing to take. There are people who love, care and pray for us, we don't see them, but it doesn't mean they aren't real, that they aren't doing so. I pray that you continue to search for a way. Find strength and wisdom.
-OxyJin
Life is "The Mewzik You Breathe"
Woah....
You make mega baller beats... AND YOU RAP LIKE A BOSS! Bravo sir, I am WAY impressed. I dig this big time. This is getting put in my everyday playlist! Thanks for letting me know about it man!
thanks! =D
This beat wasn't made by me though, it was made by my good friend BrokinPaper here on NG. He is truly amazing.
Thanks, I take a lot of time to work on delivery and flow, at the same time trying to keep the story on subject throughout. Thank YOU man =)
DAMN .
This track gave me chills. Seriously.
How long have you been rapping man? You sound like a PURE veteran ! Honestly, I can learn a thing or two from this joint man.
One of the best songs ive literally heard on NG. Good job man keep this up ! :D
-T'Freezy
wow =D I'm flattered man
I've been rapping for like 4-5 years. Didn't really step up til like mid last year. Well I hope this track helps you man =). Thank you dewd
Keep your tracks up too. I've heard a few already =) likin em
-OxyJin
I love it
This is an amazing demo man!
Can't wait for the final version bro and for you to work on mines soon, keep it up man! <3
lol thanks man =D I'll defn get to yours asap =)