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Definetly better than the first one. The animations are a bit better and the screen didn't "flicker" (in the first one the screen sometimes moved a bit without any reason).
It still needs a lot of work, but I think you are on the right track ;) .
Just work harder on you drawings and a bit more on your animations.
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I'm working on the animation ATM. Thanks for the review. =)
okay, okay...
it was a bit better then the last one, but it just seemed that you didnt put in what you could, hmmm, i have realised its your second toon, but on my second toon i was kicking ass, and no im not one of those quick learners when it comes to programs, but i found it plenty easy, so i say practice, practice and practice some more, in a years time you will be popping out awsome flash's like you do a turd =)
Yeah I know. My third one is wayy better
Better
-Good-
I thought this was better than the first one by far, but it still needs work. I liked the menu features. It made the flash much more clear. The animation was a little better in this one. I liked how there was more than one enemy this time around.
-Bad-
I thought this flash was harder to understand than the other one. I seriously had no idea what the hell just happened.
-Overall-
Better, but still needs work.
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Glad you thought it was better. Thanks for the review.
(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
Definitely a bit better than the first one. The animations were slightly better though it still has a lot of the same problems.
^^Needs Improving^^
Very hard to follow. You had that whole "Fast Forward" "Rewind" stuff, which was really confusing and I really had no idea who was shooting who and what character was which. Anyway, drawings still need a lot of work. Try improving them to start with.
I'm working on drawing now. And on the rewind thing you could see a timer apearing. It was to show that there was a chopper heading to where the male agent was
1/5 and 1/10
- Good stuff -
The story was better-ish.
- Bad stuff -
Too much writing at the beggining, while it was loading. Graphics were bad. The blood was still awful, the sound effects overlapped too much and there wasn't sound effect for some improtant things. Like sometimes the gun was shot but there was no sound.
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Thanks for the review. I know that the effects didn't sound when the gun fired I had some sound problems. (As posted in the author comments)
Anyways, I'm still new to animation so don't expect much.
Again, thanks for the review.