Sorry, but no.
I don't know where to start with this piece of crap. I think I'll try starting at the beginning, that usually works.
First off, the content and title: misleading, disjoined, and just a bad idea altogether. Your animation skills are also very low-quality, and we tend to frown on that on Newgrounds. And don't get me started on the sound; what were you trying to make the characters say? It sounded like a dying cat trying to eat a brick. I think that if you want to try again, you should at least do something that people can respect. This was NOT Newgrounds material.