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Would be a hell of a lot better if you get rid of the l337 speak and added some real comedic value to it other than "OMGLOLOLOL TH4T WAS S000 FUNNY CUZ I TALK LIKE THAT TOO!". Sick of people substituting bad engrish for real humor.
On a side note, a well-placed 'n****r' can make or break a movie - racial humor is always on topic and can usually produce at least a slight chuckle. Unfortunately for you, your 'n****r' was not well-placed nor was it humorous in the slightest. Sucks to be you, huh?
Sticking Hank in that precarious position was about the funniest thing in the entire flash, not that it's saying much. I'd have to agree with just about every other review - leave a good series to the creator, go make something original.