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Reviews for "A Wizard Creates"
Weak
Graphics - nothing extraordinary. Sound is quite primitive and repetitive. Story... There's no story actually.
Is Newgrounds dumbing down?
Occassionally something lands on the frontpage despite having no jokes, no story, no interesting visual style and no other redeeming features....
There's nothing awful about this short but it strikes me as an excercise in tweened animation and nothing more, this doesn't deserve the attention it's received.
Stick at it though, I don't want to discourage you.
Original, Just missing a few things.
I would have to say you had great animation and drawings. However you are missing several critical keys that practically gives the story a life.
1) The Problem - Without the problem there would be no action, no humor. I basically saw a wizard just zap stuff in the air
2) The Conflict - This is normally the climax of the scene, to prevent the audience from getting bored to death, this should be placed. I confess that i felt bored towards the end of your flash. Imagine if it was longer dam i would have slept (good thing u kept it short so others would barely notice it)
3) Story Line - What was the story line? This is the essence in practically everything a flash should be made out off.