Great
It was very good. I do think you need to change the wizard's eyes though, make them have a little more than just black. Otherwise it was very good.
I agree with The-d00m regarding joe633, also to joe633, correct me if I'm wrong, but aren't those three elements you named very close to eachother, with numbers one and two being almost identical and number three just expanding upon the previous two?
Anyways, very good, and it should not have been longer.
awsome!!
really really good stuff, pretty random and that's just fine! loved it ; )
to joe633 before me: obviously you didn't get the point, this was an art flash, it's not about violence or conflict or storylines. it is supposed to be a wizard that creates stuff, in this case a home. not everything has to have a purpose, this was a random art flash, and those are exactly what it sounds like-> random art
Original, Just missing a few things.
I would have to say you had great animation and drawings. However you are missing several critical keys that practically gives the story a life.
1) The Problem - Without the problem there would be no action, no humor. I basically saw a wizard just zap stuff in the air
2) The Conflict - This is normally the climax of the scene, to prevent the audience from getting bored to death, this should be placed. I confess that i felt bored towards the end of your flash. Imagine if it was longer dam i would have slept (good thing u kept it short so others would barely notice it)
3) Story Line - What was the story line? This is the essence in practically everything a flash should be made out off.
Wow
Yes short but awsome I wish I could do that...
Nice
Wow, this animation is good, its smooth and realistic (or as realistic as magic can be), I'm impressed. I only wish things like this could be done without flash, I can't afford 1000 :(