Get a writer to work with you
The animation and fighting is absolutely incredible in style, smoothness of movement, and detail. However, the plot and script well, honestly, are crap. They are illogical, unexplained, random, and without development of the characters. You could be in the top 25 if you had a good writer working with you.
In all honesty I loved it
Your opening logo alone caught my attention. The music was wonderful and added an extra spark to each scene. I loved how you made it kind of like a video game, and the charcters were cute and loveable. Even though the grammer and spelling were alittle off it didn't affect the animation that much. Keep up the goodwork I look forward to part 2!
Very nice
Mini fighter <3:D and not baad nice done lol and i liked th reason to why to kidnap her xd and the monkey im busy now ops o_o
Cute
Very adorable cept the battle was too short. =)
WTF !?!??!?!
OMG !!!!!!!
WTF ?!?
And I don´t "Lmao" becouse of the music :D