Intriguing.
I'm always kind of a jerk when it comes to reviews, but i think constructive criticism is the best kind to receive. I'd like to commend you for the impressive sprite work first of all, but there are still many things you could have done to improve this piece. The plot line imho, is perfectly fine; I'm a believer in expressing current feelings into "physical" form. So great job. The sounds, music files were pretty appropriate, so that too, I think is fine. A couple things that did turn me off though was the fact that it was too fast paced. I thought the monsters should've atleast put up a bigger fight than that. So don't be afraid to let your main character get hurt a bit more. Also, i think that your grammar should also be consistent, because the grammar just killed me. Totally could've used a more wide variety of words.
Before anything else though, it was a great piece, kept me entertained. Take my suggestions to consideration though, it wouldn't hurt to give them a try. Thanks for the hard work- keep at it.