Great concept!
Nice one! You kinda altered the linerider - concept into something different.
But you have still things to improve:
- The POGoboy - graphic sucks, make another one or ask some skilled person to do it.
- Make the gap/hole in the beginning bigger. It's too frustrating to try to get 'in' it.
- Create bigger terrains, maybe with some twists like buttons to push or obstacles to avoid
- Limit the 'draw' - power. This adds a strategic element to the game
- Insert an 'erase' function. I don't want to reset everything just to change one small part
- a 'pause' function 'd be helpful, too, as you could draw on the fly.
- make the music change or at least turn of - able.
Generally:
Work with blurs, shades to improve the graphics. That makes the game look much better. Add specials like above or e.g. stars to collect, a timer, whatever.
Although I'm not sure whether the concept was developed by yourself, I'll give you a 5/5 anyways, because this thing definitely has potential. If your're willing to improve, you'll get attention here.
Yours,
OLLR