I have 3 problems with this picture.
First, the head seems a little disproportionate. Second, her figure isn't very appealing. I think she needs to be slightly thinner and with slightly bigger boobs. I'm not trying to be ignorant or anything, but then again, with the shred of clothing you chose to give her you should at least make her nice to look at. Which brings me to the third problem. I don't see how this is rated E for everyone. I know they must have given you the chance to rate it yourself. You nearly show her nasty parts, this is definitely not E material. Deceitful. Aside from those things, this isn't bad. The shading is nice.