preety good
I liked the Jpeg work
Reviews for "The Crypt"
In the least, it made me smile...
Your animation style in this one was totally '80s anime. haha
No joke. It was funny just to watch the way you presented everything. I'd say work on your fluidity and add some shading and COLOR. :P
Overall: nice.
I looked good
Something important happened. I'm sure of it. I just don't know what. But I think the skull thing made him hallucinate. I think. maybe... i'm confused. But it did look good...
My two cents
Well.. It seemed like you switched mid way. If you were planning to make it comedic from the beginning then there should have been a moment of 'BAM! Funny' but that never really happened. Everything was eased into humor, which just made the flash confusing. This fighting contrast of two styles is throughout even in the animation. You have a very serious and chilling atmosphere, and backgrounds.. and then cartoonish things thrown on top- like the main character the cross and so forth.. It was unappealing for that contrast alone. If you had stuck to one or another it wouldn`t be so.. ill fitting. It`s like making a peanut butter and cheese sandwich. But the animation held potential (if lacking in fluent motions) and the humor would have been good, if delivered in a slightly different manner. Cheers!
Nice
I liked the style in this. The background, while detailed, I think could have been redrawn in Flash, instead of jut being bitmaps.