Not bad
Kind of cheesey, but tip #6 was twisted. 0.o I've heard of razor blades in apples, crushed glass in candy bars, but now bombs??
Reviews for "13 Halloween Tips"
remyzero responds:
CHEESE?! where?
Well.....
Give ya some stars for the animation going smooth and the few things I found funny. Nothing personal, it just wasn't funny.
remyzero responds:
thanks
not bad, very stylish
the tips themselves are random and have little in common. It bears resemblance to the delightful work of 'Children R Skary' but minus the usual twist. This could be better done with some original soundwork. Giving the expected sound is sometimes not your best bet. Sometimes, having nothing or a reaction sound is better. Also, try to not make it look like it was taken directly from a storyboard without thought to the flow. As it is, the flow of each short is a little choppy and inanimate, leaving little chance to focus on the action and react when whatever silhouette comes across the screen.
Also, said silhouettes might do better to have the sound play instead of the slam and then the sound. This is an easier way to signify the ending without becoming repetitive. Overall, the style is nice and unified, but the titles seem to change. Whether this is according to the idea is unclear, it all seems a bit random. But don't worry, I'm giving you a decent vote. Lots of creative and new ideas here, and worth watching.
great animation
but...the humour wasnt very good, and it was scary at all and oveall not very interesting. Maybe giving the tips after ea sketch wud add to the overall animation.
it was ok
well i think some of the tips could have been a little funnier, i liked the farting in the swamp one but i think some of the others could have been better. overall good work though